Student Voice
These are comments from my year 2 students about the book Spiro.
“If I was the author I would have given the reader more information about the setting, we knew it was in a backyard but that was all”
“If I was the author I would have added more adjectives and describing words to make the story more interesting and fun to read”
“Maybe the spider could have been red or black or red and black, instead of pink”
“I liked the end of the story because he could finally eat his food and he wasn’t hungry any more”
“I liked that the spider did not give up and he kept trying new ideas”
“I liked the book because he was SOOOOOO cute!”
